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Hanging from the edge for so long
Can't believe I held on
to nothing but a memory
Nothing left to bleed
and I'm numb all over

The warmth of your hand
is the first thing I felt
since...

Don't let go
for I will fall
and if I ever do
I know you'll follow me

Free falling together
Head-first collision with the unknown
there are no wings left to fly back
to where we came from
nowhere to go back now
we'll burn the night sky
together
Actually nervous uploading this one since it's my first time to write poetry without being depressed! ^^; OH NO!

Inspired by a song so much that I can't read this without a tune, hence the cliche-ish feel to it!
I think I need to write more, feels like my writing pen's getting blunt!

PS: Love this couple! I miss my CD! And this is my favorite scene from the movie, very sweet... :floating:
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:iconihavebigfeet:
"nothing left to bleed/ and i'm numb all over". loved it, and the whole piece too!! *astig!*:D
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TornElf Jan 28, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Salamat po! :floating:
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:iconuncruelmist:
nice! but to tell you honestly your preview photo almost took all of my attention.. wahahaha.. alam mo naman.. nasabi ko na sayo.. gusto ko silang magkatuluyan.. wahahaha.. and i know nafrefreak out ka sa thought! wahaha:D
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TornElf Jan 23, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yah I know! But I'm more fond of the Howl & Mononoke pairings! :D
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Jager375 Jan 21, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
It is very lovely....but i'm too jaded to elucidate about love.








^_^
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TornElf Jan 21, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually it's my first time writing without being depressed... Try checking out the ones I did when I was if it helps!

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Jager375 Jan 22, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I'll try reading it later. ^_^
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:icontornelf:
TornElf Jan 19, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're back! Thank you very much! :hug:
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